Reviews: Florenzer (2)
“A well-written historical drama”
(Paperback)
I requested this purely based on the cover and the inclusion of da Vinci, so I was unsure how my reading experience would go . What I found was a well-written historical drama that highlights the period when gay men like Leonardo were frequently punished while examining the goals of three individuals who achieve success in their attempts. This book's writing is simply beautiful, and I was always in awe of how realistic and vivid everything seemed, especially the chapters where da Vinci’s work is described. The characters are intriguing and multifaceted, showing their weak sides and touching on human emotions. I was totally engrossed in every chapter that included Leonardo, more so than those with Lorenzo de' Medici or Francesco Salviati, probably because I didn't know much about their historical significance beforehand. I believe I would have been more interested from the beginning if the novel had concentrated more on him, with Salviati and Medici acting as supporting characters. Naturally, though, that wasn't Melanson's vision, and I admire the innovative decisions he made. It is a slow read and it takes time and understanding to piece together all the plot lines, stories, and characters so it won’t be for everyone, but I am glad I took a chance on it.
Thank you to Pushkin Press and Netgalley for the opportunity to read and review this title
This reviewer received a free of charge product for review.
“An ambitious debut novel”
(Paperback)
The novel follows three parallel strands: the Medici family in a claustrophobic, crumbling Florence; a pope portrayed as physically repellent and deeply hypocritical; and a young, talented, tortured Leonardo. I struggled to understand why these three narratives occupied the same story, as they never felt fully connected in a meaningful way.
I came to the book hoping to learn more about Leonardo. Instead, I spent much of the novel watching him doubt himself, attempt to love, and struggle to work, all while feeling trapped by Florence and perpetually out of place. While this may have been the author's intention, it left me wanting a richer exploration of the man and his achievements.
There were moments when the writing was genuinely beautiful, and some of the descriptive passages were particularly effective. However, the chapter openings often relied on pronouns and narrative voices that felt too similar, making it difficult to orient myself. Rather than creating intrigue, this approach often felt frustrating and needlessly opaque.
I wanted to feel immersed in the world and invested in the characters' lives. Instead, I remained at a distance, observing rather than engaging, and never formed the emotional connection I had hoped for.
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Florenzer
Fiction, General Fiction
Phil Melanson (author)
Paperback Published on: 03/06/2027
Price: £10.99
